Poem #77

You are one sin, one vice short to
be perfect. Can I be one of those
for you tonight? If you have a wonderful
flaw it will make you seem so much
more real.

Let me show you the wild side
of this night filled with stars. Grab
a bottle from the bar, it should be
enough. Dance, yell, kiss me like
we are alone. Don’t think about
tomorrow, don’t hold yourself back.
I’m by your side, the night will hide
us in its arms.

14 thoughts on “Poem #77

    1. Thank you 😊

      1. Check out some of my poems too πŸ™‚

  1. Interesting opening sentence. —CC

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  2. You write very emotionally! πŸ˜‰

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  3. Simple, intimate & intense!

  4. Gasping for air: “p-please someone hold me up. I- I- I need water…now!” : ))

  5. Beautifully written, your voice leaves such as a warm imprint!

    “Don’t think about
    tomorrow, don’t hold yourself back.
    I’m by your side, the night will hide
    us in its arms.”

    Pinch me, I must be dreaming xx

    1. Thank you very much for your kind comment 😊

  6. Reblogged this on blocktext and commented:
    Words by Luna. Pithy, Unambiguous, Sweet. What more could you want from a poem!

    1. Thank youuu 😊

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