Poem #245

Can’t you see what you’ve made me do?
You became a part of me, you became the half of me.
Now that you’re gone I am trying to replace you
with liquids which make my head dizzy
and smoke which I twirl in my fingers
as if it was your curly hair.
You were poison which felt so good
and I am trying to replace you with
substances that don’t come close to you.

12 thoughts on “Poem #245

  1. Always a tough part of the road
    Well penned.

    1. Thank you 😊

  2. beautiful writing, sad but well written

  3. Very well written Luna
    I like it

      1. Your welcome

  4. Poetry is such a great way to deal with loss of love, no matter the cause.

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