The Clouds Still Cover Us

We are not bad people
We just did bad things.
We’re not bad at being alive
Our lives just tore us
inside,
left fighting to survive

We are just broken creatures
From a broken land
Our wings cracked
By another’s hand.

We are rounded
And grounded.
Imbalanced and
Imperfect.

Our disappointments never drowned,
Confusions never crushed
Even with souls open for the sun,
we are covered with clouds.

Showing work to other people is always scary, but, as a young and enthusiastic poet, I’d love to know what you think of my words in the comments section below! Follow my blog for more: ajmwritesonline.wordpress.com

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6 thoughts on “The Clouds Still Cover Us

  1. What a powerful poem! Loved how ypu maintained a discontinuous rhyming scheme. It complemented the last stanza!

  2. ivanabikorovih May 19, 2020 — 2:15 pm

    Keep writing!

  3. Truly heartfelt! You’re amazing 😊💛

  4. Very much enjoyed this! Keep it up.

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