Can’t you see what you’ve made me do?
You became a part of me, you became the half of me.
Now that you’re gone I am trying to replace you
with liquids which make my head dizzy
and smoke which I twirl in my fingers
as if it was your curly hair.
You were poison which felt so good
and I am trying to replace you with
substances that don’t come close to you.
Always a tough part of the road
Well penned.
Thank you 😊
beautiful writing, sad but well written
Thank you!
pleasure
Very well written Luna
I like it
Thank you!
Your welcome
Nice piece
Thank you!
Poetry is such a great way to deal with loss of love, no matter the cause.
I agree!