I just keep feeling something deep inside me.
It is a feeling that I’ve felt once before.
It feels like the warmth of the sun.
I must be thinking that I’m falling in love.
I knew this from somewhere deep inside!
She is the only one that I truly love.
The sun’s shining in my soul.
In the blueness of the sky, I will follow her to the ends of the earth.
She will always be there for me.
She melts the ice in my heart.
Why won’t she notice the feelings I have for her?
“You are the flame to my candle.”
There is a light inside you and you let it shine.
You guided me in my darkest days.
Your soul is the brightest thing I’ve ever seen.
The moonlight is jealous of the sun!
We have went through so much to get to this moment.
I will be the light that will guide you right back home.
You will shine just like the sun.
Our love will last for the rest of our lives.
Remember that I love you so!
There is a light inside you and you let it shine.

Your love is all that I need!


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18 thoughts on “Shine

  1. I draw a picture, That matched her lovely heart And I handed her the drawing Since it was me from the start. And I stood there with a smile That slowly turned to pain As you ripped my paper heart in half Without trying to explain. And you walked away for a while, And I believed it to be a mistake, For the love of my life would never Leave my paper heart to break. Yet somehow you did it to me And tears fell down from my eyes And as I looked into the mirror I found myself hard to recognize. So this time, I dropped the pencil And this time I grabbed a knife And I sat you down and made you watch As I began to take my life. I looked back on my broken heart As tears washed away the ink, Redeeming myself at last of the chance To die the way we think. Just looking at your hoping smile My body began to shake I said out loud, in a dying whisper, “Here’s a heart you can’t break”.


    If possible share it Dear

    Regards Aman


      1. I think it has a good flow, it’s, I don’t know how to express it, but it’s kind of warm. It just gives me a nice feeling when I read it.
        “You are the flame to my candle.”
        There is a light inside you and you let it shine.
        Loved this part

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      2. I loved that part too! Plus it was one of my favorite set of lyrics that have ever done with the show called Bleach. The character on the original post is named Toshiro Hitsugaya. Let’s just say that this song is about a girl that he likes.

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