To Bristol Town!

Busy, busy, busy bus:
can you handle all of us?
Filling upstairs; filling down…
Can you take us all to town?

P’rhaps we won’t stop anymore,
now there’s no space – seat or floor.
‘Less someone wants to alight…
through crowds they’ll have to slip or fight!

Now we’re trav’ling pretty fast!
Not far left this journey hast.
Traffic, traffic: sud’nly gone!
To bottleneck elsewhere you’re borne.

Busy, busy, busy bus:
can you handle all of us?
Filled’s the upstairs; filled’s the down…
Now, take us on to Bristol town! 

My name is William Altoft. I’m a writer in and from (and consistently on) Bristol, in the UK.


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3 thoughts on “To Bristol Town!

  1. Wonderfully penned!! Nice to read.

  2. Good morning Luna. I enjoyed your work today. Have fun and be safe.

    1. All credits for this poem go ti William Altoft 😊
      And I wish you a lovely day ahead!

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