Liquid Wind

Blankets of every color on the grass
Memories sway from the late 60s to a more futuristic feel
What’s wanted
Empty-eyed to it all
Aware of the parts that will turn
When dreariness comes and the clouds make their way through…
To be seen through windows- the only time when love is felt
The hardest thunder
Free, without ego
Rises with the highest rises
Strong tones
Loving gestures
Beats reminiscent of how the air was

-Kayla Farrar
Blog: https://kayfarrar.wordpress.com/

Well, I’m 29, I’ve enjoyed writing since the younger years of my time here in the world, my night dreams with hints of reality have great impact in the things I write…..

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One thought on “Liquid Wind

  1. I like your poem, it shows a level of thought that’s unusual in wordpress poetry. But don’t forget punctuation. The only punctuation used is the contemporary and informal … Though modern education gives communication skills a back seat to math, punctuation would help people understand what you mean.

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