I am feeling defeated

How can one be lonely
When billions live on earth
There’s five, ten, or even 100
To each and every one of us
So how can one be lonely
There’s people all around
It only takes a second
To help a stranger
Out
So find someone
Who’s standing close
Strike up a conversation
Take your time, you might find
That you can bridge the separation
So how can I be so damn lonely
When there’s people all around
I might be scared,but I do care
I suffer from the inside out
I’ve known this all along
And I’m well aware of the
Friends I could’ve found
Once again I feel defeated
Alone with a tear in my eye
I can’t fight back this feeling
That there’s more in this life
Day has now ended
Sleeps on its way
I’ll try with courage tomorrow
To make a friend and say “Hey”

Hi, I’m Kevin and I am new to public expressions. My poetry is not and will never be prefect. So I do apologize for that. I enjoy writing and I’m in the process of learn to write with structure although that may not show for while. Thank you all for reading. I hope you enjoy my work. Have a blessed day.
                                        R.K.H
http://2blankthoughts.wordpress.com


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13 thoughts on “I am feeling defeated

  1. We need friends to make us happy but we don’t need any one who make us feel lonely 👍

    1. Agreed!!! There’s enough in life that makes me feel lonely I don’t people to help with that. Thanks for reading and the comment.

  2. i like your poem. poems need not be structured write the way you feel is the best kind of poetry.

  3. sorry i thought kevin wrote the poem above. i am a little confused by the after comment.

    1. I did write it. And I agree. I get told all the time that I need to structure it or I need to write in a certain way. But ultimately i write the it makes me feel.
      Thanks for reading and the comment.

      1. poetry flows from the unstructured soul

  4. life is so confusing to me.

    1. It always confuses me. Lol

  5. “Hey!” to you Kevin! This poem definitely inspires the love of friendship.

  6. We are with you Kevin

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