Freedom

Freedom.
Came.
First.

Freedom grew,
Amongst the wild grass
And breeze blown through-
Left uninterrupted
Uncorrupted
Unknown-
By men.

Freedom came first,
Amongst the untrodden dandelions,
the whispers of the wind. Uncursed
by unbroken desires
Lying idle
At the bottom,
bare footed hill.
An unwrapped,
unspoilt present.

Go where
they haven’t been.
Go where
the grass is green,
Stop and stare. Let the black mud
sparkle clean.

Showing work to other people is always scary, but, as a young and enthusiastic poet, I’d love to know what your thoughts on my work in the comments section below and what impact my words had on you! Follow my blog for more: ajmwritesonline.wordpress.com

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