Those last two lines of the second stanza seem to hit the nail right on the head. Then the third stanza is just chilling because it shows the mostly inevitable outcome of a “take” relationship to a “give-back-and-take” relationship. Upsetting topics for sure, but great writing nonetheless.
They love to call us a temptress of the garden. Well, I’ll show you temptress. I’ll show you a monster. I love that we are on the same page (and that you wrote this on a typewriter!). Let me know if I’m reading a different book lol I’m not afraid to be wrong.
I love this 🙂
i collect typewriters so this piece warmed my typewriting heart! @typewritingisbeauty
Those last two lines of the second stanza seem to hit the nail right on the head. Then the third stanza is just chilling because it shows the mostly inevitable outcome of a “take” relationship to a “give-back-and-take” relationship. Upsetting topics for sure, but great writing nonetheless.
They love to call us a temptress of the garden. Well, I’ll show you temptress. I’ll show you a monster. I love that we are on the same page (and that you wrote this on a typewriter!). Let me know if I’m reading a different book lol I’m not afraid to be wrong.